Posted by
harmui
17 yrs ago
"the main line among his three collections, which "include the pret-a-porter line Richmond X.
Is there any difference between having and not having a comma after "colletions"?
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and that belongs under playgroups how?
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Huh?
Is that a question of grammer?
If it is then I think you should have quoted the whole paragraph.
"The 140-square-meter store in Causeway Bay offers apparel and fashion accessories in the John Richmond collection, the main line among his three collections, which include the pret-a-porter line Richmond X, and the denim range, Richmond Denim. Other collections are on the racks at the boutique in Harbour City."
Maybe my English is poor but I would have written it differently- "The 140-square-meter store in Causeway Bay offers apparel and fashion accessories from(not 'in') the John Richmond collection, the main line among his three collections which include the pret-a-porter line Richmond X, and the denim range Richmond Denim. Other collections are on the racks at the boutique in Harbour City."
The reporter likes commas I guess.
And what does that have to do with playgroups?
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