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Posted by harmui 17 yrs ago
"the main line among his three collections, which "include the pret-a-porter line Richmond X.


Is there any difference between having and not having a comma after "colletions"?


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ldsllvn 17 yrs ago
and that belongs under playgroups how?

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omaharrison 17 yrs ago
Huh?

Is that a question of grammer?

If it is then I think you should have quoted the whole paragraph.



"The 140-square-meter store in Causeway Bay offers apparel and fashion accessories in the John Richmond collection, the main line among his three collections, which include the pret-a-porter line Richmond X, and the denim range, Richmond Denim. Other collections are on the racks at the boutique in Harbour City."


Maybe my English is poor but I would have written it differently- "The 140-square-meter store in Causeway Bay offers apparel and fashion accessories from(not 'in') the John Richmond collection, the main line among his three collections which include the pret-a-porter line Richmond X, and the denim range Richmond Denim. Other collections are on the racks at the boutique in Harbour City."

The reporter likes commas I guess.

And what does that have to do with playgroups?

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